really excellent. great barney internal voice. each line is an excellent echo of the show, bringing its mythology in without knocking us over the head. it's the tightest himym drabble i've seen. keep writing!!! oh, and sharing! (and should you need a beta, i offer my services--i'm pretty awesome)
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Date: 2008-05-22 05:21 am (UTC)